Mr. Piddles was left to himself for the day because Jonathon
was at school. Mr. Piddles dreaded these days because they often lacked any
form of adventure. A typical school day for Mr. Piddles looked like this:
7 AM: Wake up with Jonathon, help him get ready for school
and pack his lunch
8 AM: Watch the squirrels and birds argue through Jonathon’s
bedroom window
10 AM: Read all of the book titles on Jonathon’s bookshelf
11 AM: Eat some dust bunnies for lunch
2 PM: Try to talk to Jonathon’s other stuffed animals,
particularly Ms. Pearl, a lovely black bear
3 PM: Watch for Jonathon’s school bus to come home
After Jonathon got home they would do a little bit of
homework and then go explore. Today, however, Mr. Piddles had had enough. He
would have his own adventure without Jonathon. So he picked himself up and
walked out of Jonathon’s bedroom. He wasn’t sure what he would go do, but he
knew that Sugriva was still in need of their help. Mr. Piddles slowly wandered
out to the tree where they had previously met him.
“Mr. Sugriva! Are you home?” Mr. Piddles yelled out to see
if he could talk to Sugriva.
However, no one came out, so Mr. Piddles began to wander
through the forest. Soon Mr. Piddles found another large monkey lying on the ground in the middle of all the trees. Who could this be?
“Hello?” Mr. Piddles began to poke the monkey, testing if he
was still alive.
“Oof, why hello there!” The monkey opened his eyes suddenly
and sat upright.
“I’m Mr. Piddles. Who are you?” Mr. Piddles stretched out a
paw to shake hands with the monkey.
“Hello, Mr. Piddles, my name is Hanuman! And I am looking for
my friend Sugriva; have you seen him? I used to work with him and I have a very
important message for him.” The monkey started looking around the trees while
Mr. Piddles talked. "A long time ago Sugriva and I fought together against a very evil demon king, Ravana. It was a very bad battle that caused a lot of damage. We had to leap ahead to the island the evil king was on and worked together to defeat him with another common friend, Rama. I am hoping to find my old friend Sugriva so that we may discuss some new developments from this war."
“Well, I haven’t seen Sugriva today, but I have met him here.
Perhaps he is just out visiting another forest? I am sure he will return shortly!” Mr. Piddles wasn’t sure what these new developments were that Hanuman mentioned, but they sounded dangerous. And he honestly wasn’t sure where Sugriva
had run off to.
“Oh, hmm, well, I will have to check back later to see if he
is here. You said your name is Mr. Piddles?” Mr. Piddles nodded. “Well, it was
very nice to meet you, Mr. Piddles. If you see Sugriva please tell him that I am
looking for him! I will be here to nap until this evening; I do enjoy a nice
warm afternoon nap in the forest.” Hanuman lay back down and closed his eyes.
Mr. Piddles began his walk back to the house.
‘That was odd… I wonder what message Hanuman has for the
monkey king?’ Mr. Piddles thought to himself as he entered the house. He would
have to tell Jonathon about his adventure in their backyard once he got home. It
was only 1 o’clock, so he still had plenty of time to catch up on his daily
squirrel and bird adventures.
Hanuman |
Author's Note:
I really like the characters Sugriva and Hanuman so I was
glad to incorporate them in my story again this week, although Sugriva wasn’t
truly present in this story. I am trying to expand my universe with Mr. Piddles
and Jonathon, so hopefully I will be able to use new characters from future
weeks' stories with them. I wanted Mr. Piddles to go on his own adventure
this week because I liked the story from the
Mahabharata that was told by a mongoose. Although Mr. Piddles is not a
mongoose, he is the main animal character in my stories so I thought it would
be fun to write from his perspective. It was fun trying to think of all the
things a stuffed polar bear would do whilst waiting for his friend to return. I
also wanted to utilize the fact that Hanuman was also included in both the
Ramayana and the Mahabharata. I tried to use some parts of Hanuman's encounter with Bhima, how he was lying on the ground and how he introduced himself particularly. I also wanted to give some background as to who Hanuman is and how he and Sugriva know each other. Since these are the two main stories we have read
so far I wanted to stick to familiar characters that would be easily
recognizable to other readers. I think
that next week I will have the two meet and perhaps create a some adventures
with all four of the characters!
Hi Kaitlin! This was a very fun story to read! I'm assuming Mr. Piddles is a stuffed animal or toy of some sorts? I thought he was an animal at first, but then realized it was more likely that he was a toy. The "Toy Story" feel that you gave the story was very creative! The schedule that you included of a typical day for Mr. Piddles was a nice touch. It made you realize that Mr. Piddles lives for exploration and of course Jonathon. It sounds like Jonathon has a very impressive backyard! Just as you stated, I wonder what Hanuman had to say to Sugriva. Maybe for the next story there can be detail about what he had to say. I really enjoyed all of the dialogue between Mr. Piddles and Hanuman. It gave this story a very playful feel that was easy to understand. This was a great story and I'm excited to read more!
ReplyDeleteHi Kaitlin! I really enjoyed the story, but I had a bit of confusion as to what character Mr.Piddles is? Is he a dog or a toy? Regardless, I really enjoyed his adventures! It reminded me of "Toy Story" as well, and since it is one of my favorite movies it brought back so many memories.
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